The Missing Dynamic
When I submitted Heirs of Elemental Evil to the RPGA, they asked of just one change. For a writer, a single edit on a project is a pretty rare occourance. Usually there are many small details that need to be altered before acceptance by an editor. Unfortunately that single change was to delete the relationship between the Player Characters Talos and Hound. I can understand their reasoning, and didn’t fight them on their request.